Wednesday, 25 November 2009

Feedback on Music Advert Rough Cut

We asked our teachers for some feedback on the advert and they had good suggestions that we were keen to change. They said that we should use a different image as we had used the same image as the DVD cover, and it would be nice to use a variety so we’ve used an image from the same shoot but this time next to a tree, we thought this looked more effective. They said that the middle text ‘music made a man of me’ is quite dull and needs to be bolder so we edited this and made the white outline bolder and the actual black text bolder, this made an instant better visual look. Also the text at the top of the page is black and they said it is difficult to see, as the background is busy and slightly blends in. Also the ‘25th November’ font wasn’t appropriate and didn’t go with our artist theme so we changed it into a font which we have throughout to keep the theme, they also said that this text looks unprofessional as the white box is still around so we used the magic tool to remove it. The text still didn’t stand out so we added an effect which made it white and fuzzy around the edge of the text so the text is dominant from the background.

We thought the whole advert was missing something then thought we would add one more thing by adding store logo’s at where the viewer can find the album and put them in the bottom right hand corner.

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